Haiku (The Low Yellow...) - Poem by Jack Kerouac

kaitlin s (4/17/2018 8:41:00 AM)

this is not a haiku, get it together tf (Report) Reply

havana oonana (2/27/2018 1:33:00 PM)

please check your counting this poem is 4,4,5 and a haiku is 5,7,5 thanks bubye (Report) Reply

Lucille rebottom (2/27/2018 1:33:00 PM)

ummm this is wrong a haiku is 5 7 5 yours is 4 4 5 smh: ((( (Report) Reply

Shaka Moundiessdfjrud (2/27/2018 1:30:00 PM)

Umm you did not do this right. This is not how you write a Haiku (Report) Reply

Lucille redbottom (2/27/2018 1:30:00 PM)

umm i thought a haiku was 5 7 5, your poem is 4 4 5: ((((((it doesn't make sense (Report) Reply

miranda jones (2/27/2018 1:24:00 PM)

THIS IS NOT A HAIKU THIS IS TOTALLY WRONG it is 5 7 5 not 4 4 5 (Report) Reply

Chinedu Dike (2/5/2018 7:08:00 AM)

Beautiful Haiku nicely brought forth. (Report) Reply

David Williamson (12/20/2017 6:48:00 PM)

When I Misbehave/ I See Her Mounted On Me/ Asking For A Light (Report) Reply

Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/3/2016)

It is indeed a moon to us, Nice little story of galaxy.... (Report) Reply

* Sunprincess * (4/29/2014 3:01:00 PM)

..........beautiful imagery...very nice.. (Report) Reply

Colleen Courtney (4/29/2014 8:33:00 AM)

Lovely haiku's.'short and sweet. (Report) Reply

Captain Herbert Poetry (4/27/2014 3:38:00 AM)

Very nice description. Good (Report) Reply

* Sunprincess * (3/9/2014 8:09:00 PM)

......so picture perfect...enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

Dimitris(Jimmy) Psachos (6/17/2007 1:56:00 AM)

Brilliant! Such a stupendous and sacred moment, only in the Japanese masters can you find. Well, I'm really looking forward on starting one of his beat novels...! (Report) Reply

Max Reif (10/30/2005 7:38:00 AM)

I wondered what kind of haiku Kerouac would write. A pretty good one, I find, as an image, at least! (Report) Reply