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Haiku-The Snake

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Snake stalking a frog
Strike! Frog jumps into a pond
Eagle had a feast.
Haiku-The Snake
Monday, September 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
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Emmie Shep 03 January 2020
Years ago, I had a haiku book, and remember this poem. When the snake flees The eyes that glare at me Remain in the grass. Wish i could find that book! Also How white the peonies When I open my eyes And see
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 January 2018
An excellent Haiku composed by a brilliant mind. Loke, you are truly great!
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Loke Kok Yee 05 January 2018
How very nice of you, Thank you so much.
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Muhammad Ali 19 July 2016
I like short poems, this one is also very nice. There always remains the final predator. The story of snake ended, but eagle...
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Loke Kok Yee 19 July 2016
Thank you for reading Mohd.
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The attempted eater was eaten. A well composed composition that is short, sweet and significant!
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Rajnish Manga 14 December 2015
The imagery is so discerning and the words are so powerful that the entire sequence comes alive before us like a video film. Thanks, Kok Yee.
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Shahin Latif 24 November 2015
Excellent Haiku. I enjoyed it. Thank you so much.
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Allotey Abossey 26 October 2015
You write well my friend. Good work
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Pamela Sinicrope 22 October 2015
Great Haiku. I couldn't wait to see what was in store for the last line. Well done! :)
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Brian Mayo 18 October 2015
Very Nice haiku! (I rescued a great blue heron from the jaws of a snapping turtle six years ago...)
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Anish Debnath 15 October 2015
Lovely haiku.This is the rule of nature.Every predator is a prey.
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