Saturday, November 25, 2006

Happiness Comments

Rating: 4.8
Happiness eludes me.
I chase after it in firsts, highs, greats, excellents.
Puff…it vanishes. It is fractions
Of seconds, tiny, invisible, gone.


Liz Bennett
Jon Lloyd 28 November 2006
I hope your fractions soon add up to a whole! Nice work. Jx.
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Roger Bowman 25 November 2006
Cool cool poemo Liz. All the best Roger
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Viraj Bhanshaly (v.j) 25 November 2006
its good th efirst bit is lyk a chase... can u read my poems pleaz tell me if theyre good thanks
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