bethany seed

Rookie (19 may / england)

Happy Birthday Honey - Poem by bethany seed

Honey
you only get this once a year
a day when you were born
the world came a happyer place
happy birthday honey
you may be getting older
but my love for you
will never change
our love gets stronger
as the time go's by
this day shoud be
rembered
because you are the greatest man in the world
you will forever have my heart and my soul
this is my gife to you honey
happy birthday my sweet honey bee
have a great day
on this greatest event of the year
everyone should know
it's you birthday!
my belove
forever i will hold your hand
be there for you when
you are sick
make sure your ok
happy birthday honey


Comments about Happy Birthday Honey by bethany seed

  • Saadat Tahir (7/8/2011 12:34:00 PM)


    nice loving lines....i dunno...inherently sad and a bit melancholy...guess it is in the nature of love..
    very nice

    sat
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  • (8/1/2009 3:14:00 AM)


    a beautiful poem for your lover... (Report) Reply

  • (1/6/2009 7:45:00 AM)


    the person should be avery important
    well a very nice poem.
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  • (12/13/2008 9:01:00 PM)


    I know who is the honey in this poem of yours.Hes a great man and my buddy, Sulaiman.May your love with him prosper all the way beth.

    Your buddy,
    Ameer Mcarthur,
    Somware, UK.
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  • (12/9/2008 2:22:00 PM)


    aww a lovely poem beth... Your lover must be thrilled with a persent like this poem...10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2008 8:22:00 PM)


    BETHANY, CONSIDERING THE GENTLEMAN YOU ARE HONORING, THIS IS ESPECIALLY TOUCHING. A VERY FITTING TRIBUTE AND GIFT TO SOMEONE WHO HAS GIFTED MANY WITH HIS WORDS OF PASSION AND LOVE. WE GAIN INSIGHT AND APPRECIATION FROM EVERY POEM HE PRESENTS TO US. A SPECIAL MAN, INDEED. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. MY BEST, CAROL (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2008 3:05:00 PM)


    Sweet, cute and full of emotion
    I like it, i thnk it's well written and I think you definetly need to give it to him.
    Good Job
    +10
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  • (12/7/2008 8:52:00 AM)


    So lovely..and sweet..the emotions flowing through...

    A lovely gift..very poetic...a lucky one..to have someone like you...

    A 10+++!
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  • (12/6/2008 7:43:00 PM)


    Hi Bethany Honey I could really feel the emotion in this poem. It did tease me a little, as it started to rhyme, so I didn't get the flow so good as I could.. When you type a poem on this site and see a red line under it, it means spelling error and believe me, I would make plenty if I didn't know this. This is just a gift to us in this great computer age of ours so we know how to improve. Keep up your passion and love of writing....Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2008 5:03:00 PM)


    The emotional sincerety comes through to the reader. This is very good. The rhythm is a little off in places as it is read. Try reading it aloud. Perhaps,
    something more will come to you as well. I like it a lot. A solid 8.

    GW62
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  • (12/4/2008 8:40:00 AM)


    the best present anyone could ask for.. well done 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2008 7:09:00 AM)


    a very beautiful dedication to someone so close....i liked it thanks for sharing 10++

    rgds
    asif
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  • (12/1/2008 7:56:00 AM)


    happy birthday to my pal, to my teacher, to my sensei, to my friends, to my father, to my brother, I hope you better than yesterday and happy with bethany forever and forever (Report) Reply

  • (12/1/2008 7:21:00 AM)


    Nice birthday wishes for one of the best poets on here, well said Bethany,
    Lynda xx
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  • (11/29/2008 10:58:00 PM)


    i like this kind of poem a lot ''personal ones '' they r all about true emotions ''., and i have to say to Sulaiman u r a lucky guy. (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (11/29/2008 3:33:00 AM)


    Hi Bethany honey! This poem means a lot to me.Thanks to you honey. I'll treasure this piece forever.

    Your sweet honey,
    Sulaiman
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  • (11/29/2008 3:05:00 AM)


    It’s a nice poem you little honey bee. (Report) Reply

  • (11/29/2008 2:59:00 AM)


    What a beautiful tribute to your ' honey ' on his birthday.Well done Bethany.

    Regards,
    Dean Nordy,
    US of A.
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  • (11/28/2008 9:25:00 PM)


    ....................it's fine as birthday wishes go, if a bit 'treacly' in places. Cheers, Jerry (Report) Reply

  • (11/28/2008 5:35:00 PM)


    this is so sweet

    captured the readers hearts aswell as your boy's

    nice one!
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 28, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 9, 2011


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