Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 81,510 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

He Is Claimed To Have Your Complete Devotion? - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

The behavior of your religion sickens.
And the wickedness observed that you portray...
Will not delay how I am perceived by God!
Not 'if' you are as close as you say you are!
And He is claimed to have your complete devotion?
For some reason...
I am not at all concerned,
About what God thinks of me.


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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 12, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 29, 2011


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