Hear Alone - Poem by Gemma

hear al alone sitting in the corner of my room waiting for you to come bac to help me.
to tell me that you love me and hold me tight and never let go cos being hear with u means the world to me i need u to love me wit out u i wouldent b.
if i new u wouldent b bac i would end my life rite hear nd now tryed once b4 but then i heard ur voice out side my door i sat there curled up when i saw u i cryed u came up to me n held me tight. held me in ur arms took tha blade away and didint talk u just held me tight till we fell asleep thats where we lay till morn we didnt wake up that day we lay there till our graves were dug and our coffens was made we lay together and 4 ever ul hold me tight

Comments about Hear Alone by Gemma

  • (3/28/2008 1:55:00 AM)

    I think you meant to say Here Alone, Gemma. To Hear is to listen. Also the poem would have been better without all those abbreviations, but keep trying. (Report) Reply

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  • Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (3/27/2008 9:14:00 AM)

    Not bad, as novelty. In need of protection, but in a very nice air. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 27, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 27, 2008

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