Hell Poem by Fredrick McDonald

Hell



for when you touched my heart you put me through hell
but people say o' well just dont care as you weep
thought's and feeling run so deep.
your heart feels broken and ever so cheap
waiting for you to say the right words
some are less said or seldum herd
with in this vers it is now feeling worse
from the vers my heart can no longer take a beating
man he wasnt kidding until that time you take the blame until you
you feel all the pain you caused my heart will take a pause
never to beat until you say you was long how could i have made this song
from tenderness and tears you will know i care
untill we unite and you make it all right

from when you touch my heart it wasnt very smart
birth of a child it felt so wild to touch your hand made me feel like a man
until the day you come around i guess i will never settle down
with in this vers it is now feeling worse my heart is about to burst
the joy and the pain now that you have gone i can move on
now that you have moved on and run away i guess my heart will stay
until the day you explain why you hurt me so bad and left me feeling so sad

i guess thats why i am your dad
people will come and go but i am here to stay
until that day we will part from this earthy plain
i hope god can stop all this pain
when you look back and see what you have done
it will be to late for the days has gone by ever so slow
i will know when you see your wrong i will release it with in my song
heaven has enough tears that where shed
but i guess thats why im feeling so dead
for when you touch my heart you put me though hell
but all the people say o well untill they feel this hell
then they will know how it feels your heart feels broken and ever so cheap
waiting for you to say the right words
some are less said or seldum herd
with in this vers it is now feeling worse
from the vers my heart can no longer take a beating
man he wasnt kidding until that time you take the blame until you
you feel all the pain you caused my heart will take a pause
never to beat until you say you was long how could i have made this song
from tenderness and tears you will know i care
untill we unite and you make it all right

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Fredrick McDonald

Fredrick McDonald

Seneca Falls, N.Y. now in Genoa N.Y.
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