Didier Sixte Kahungu
Thursday, October 9, 2008

Her Morning Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0
Up the sun goes
His rays beg for acceptance
Her breath welcomes you
Her eyes the sun reaches not the toes


Didier Sixte Kahungu
Gloria Wekesa 14 October 2008
great poem well written and expressed the work of a real poet and real talent. i loved it.
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Samantha Ashley 10 October 2008
Very well articulated and, it flows very nicely. Definitely a 10.
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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 October 2008
interesting images and descriptions.......
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 October 2008
Hey Didier, i bet u her morning breath is as good as her morning beauty too.......
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Neil Marsden 09 October 2008
Some stunning imagery throughout this piece, gorgeous! Neil.
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