Friday, July 3, 2009

Heroine. Comments

Rating: 4.8

You got me addicted now I’m involved in this sickness
I fell for you like everyone else
I kissed you and hugged you like I couldn’t live without it
Then you dropped me to the floor


Jessica Foster
Verter Mcdougald 21 August 2015

This was really amazing, I really liked this.

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 July 2009

this is very powerful write indeed friend! ! your expressed yourself well indeed.. felt these lines.. nice! ! ! 10 with love shan

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Shekhar Joshi 03 July 2009

that's so very sad poem...........nicely depicted the heartbroken gurl very well and expressed the story beautifully........ good work....... ;)

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Taylor Fong 03 July 2009

i like this a lot. great write. (:

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