Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 701,971 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

High About System - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Nobody can speak high about system
That the pattern or model is suiting them
It may have its inherent flaws
From where they can draw the strength

Mighty people may have some say
Powerful may snatch the big slice away
The power game may exert influence
It may remind always about the presence

The poor people always suffer most
They may have certain voice to cost]
Yet that remains confined to limited space
With bad system to provides with no good choice

Many countries may claim and talk high
But people are left high and dry
Lawlessness has surfaced now in street
Where people express their anguish and greet

How far people can tolerant apathy?
How long they can live on mere sympathy?
Why poor can not be taken care of?
Why rich too can not be accommodated?

No doubt, it is people’s representation
But it still remains full with lot many questions
Why some of the problems can not be addressed?
Why people’s life can always be made cheap and chased


Comments about High About System by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2014 5:51:00 PM)

    nice job


    Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 1 day ago
    nice job
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2014 5:50:00 PM)

    Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2014 7:42:00 PM)

    welcome Emma R Michael and Victoria Loberiza Grana Padillo like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2014 7:39:00 PM)

    superb


    Michelle Bay16 minutes ago
    great poem. makes a great statement.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2014 7:39:00 PM)

    I only wish


    Matthew Fournier15 minutes ago
    That I could break out of my rhyming shell and write prose like this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2014 7:39:00 PM)

    Bit wishy washy


    Alexander Clifshaw13 minutes ago
    Good points, needs better structure to allow the annunciation to give greater impact to the main points you are saying, at the moment you get a little lost
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2014 7:13:00 PM)

    Nobody can speak high about system
    That the pattern or model is suiting them
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, January 10, 2014


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