Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 701,052 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

High About System - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Nobody can speak high about system
That the pattern or model is suiting them
It may have its inherent flaws
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2014 5:51:00 PM)

    nice job


    Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 1 day ago
    nice job
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2014 5:50:00 PM)

    Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2014 7:42:00 PM)

    welcome Emma R Michael and Victoria Loberiza Grana Padillo like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2014 7:39:00 PM)

    superb


    Michelle Bay16 minutes ago
    great poem. makes a great statement.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2014 7:39:00 PM)

    I only wish


    Matthew Fournier15 minutes ago
    That I could break out of my rhyming shell and write prose like this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2014 7:39:00 PM)

    Bit wishy washy


    Alexander Clifshaw13 minutes ago
    Good points, needs better structure to allow the annunciation to give greater impact to the main points you are saying, at the moment you get a little lost
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2014 7:13:00 PM)

    Nobody can speak high about system
    That the pattern or model is suiting them
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