Friday, January 20, 2006

Hold You In My Smile Comments

Rating: 4.2
Sweet moment, stay with me,
and pray do not flee so soon,
Let me enjoy the bliss of that
first kiss beneath the moon.

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Ernestine Northover
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 06 December 2020
So profound! Every reader will remember the memory of their first kiss when s/he reads this poem. Heartiest congratulations on your poem’s selection as the ‘Modern Poem of the Day’!
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Mahtab Bangalee 06 December 2020
Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile. /// a heartiest loving poem penned; from the core of heart the love has been expressed; this beautiful smile; this uttered the soft voice, this arm, this beautiful surrounding; this neat and clean all only for the love and living with the peaceful heart; an enjoyable loving poem
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Soul 2 Soul 06 December 2020
Love my soul mate and this poem is for my soulmate, cradling
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Lyn Paul 06 December 2020
A beautiful way to remember that special person and passing the joy on to others with your smile.
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Savita Tyagi 06 December 2020
A sweet moment of life caught beautifully to spreads its bliss. Amazing is power of words.
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Ratnakar Mandlik 06 December 2020
Holding the sweet moment in a smile " The conceptualization in itself is superb. A well deserved modern poem of the day. Heartiest Congratulations.
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Edward Kofi Louis 06 December 2020
Sweet moments of love! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 December 2020
A poem of happiness. It made me smile
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Belle Wassermeister 06 December 2020
Wonderful work, Ernestine! Congratulations! Modern poem of the day!
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Ejalonibu Abraham 14 September 2020
Hello dear beautiful poet I love this poem, please read and comment on my new poems
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Pamela Lutwyche 31 August 2020
Nice poem, with a lot of feeling
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Juliet Languedoc 20 July 2020
thanks for your poem.
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Sachidananda Panda 26 June 2020
" ...please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile." What a beauty...! lovely! lovely!
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Emmanuel Chibuike 04 June 2020
very lovely poem, i enjoyed every words in it.
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Ellen Ni Bheachain 28 May 2020
Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it.
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Alison Mujati 25 April 2020
good poem, worth reading thank you for sharing. may you read my poem the blurred figure
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Aryan Jaiswal 11 April 2020
Last line is the best line of the poem
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Morgan Dude 21 January 2020
very lovely thank you.
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Vidya Murali 25 December 2019
Simply superb... personification of the sweet moments.... good articulation
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Louis Rams 23 December 2019
an excellent poem which touches the mind and heart
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