Crisu Marius

Rookie (8 April 1988 / Iasi, Romania)

Hole - Poem by Crisu Marius

It's dark and seems so deep
It's very hard now not to weep
It hurts me badly just to breathe
I am reminded of the pain i felt
When you turned around and left
Convinced that I am no longer
Fit to be with you, your lover
This hole that's in my chest
Though painful and i can't rest
Cannot be filled, it's a reminder
That i can trust and love no longer...


Comments about Hole by Crisu Marius

  • (11/27/2010 6:21:00 AM)


    Fantastic poem rich in imagery and style. I liked it.
    Nice write.
    I earnestly invite you to write a comment on my poem 'Abortion.'
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 27, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 27, 2010


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