forever yours

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Hollow - Poem by forever yours

why do i feel this way?
i feel so empty all the time, never truley knowing why
i don't feel, i can't feel
everytime something happens i fake, i go through the motions
iv'e become so good at faking my emotions that not even my parents can tell
but when i let the mask slip everyone notices
i'm not the usual happy bubbly girl everyone expects me to be
no one know's i'm so hollow inside


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  • (4/18/2011 9:24:00 PM)

    I can feel the emptiness you're trying to portray through this poem. I think I can safely say that at some time in every girl's life they have all felt this way too. I know I have, and I can tell that you're saying what you feel in this poem. This poem shows that you have talent and the feeling to use it. Thank you for sharing this poem, and please write more! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 18, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, May 20, 2011


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