Home Poem by Jesse Hurt

Home

Rating: 4.3


Today we drone
no feelings shall be shown
we just want to be home
what is home?
definition of hell?
place to put your shoes
or stuff you never use
stay happy like a muse
mental abuse

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Honey Bear 1035774 26 March 2009

that was amazing. maybe if you went into a little more detail it would of been better (in my eyes) . i like it because its sweet and simple, yet gets then point across to the readers of this poem. :) mind looking at some of mine?

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Ana Guerrero 08 March 2009

Very...real it could have used more emotion

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Tori Beals 04 March 2009

This is very intersesting. I really like it

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Jesse Hurt

Jesse Hurt

Reno, Nevada
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