Thursday, December 15, 2005

How Come? Good To Bad? Comments

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despretly yet so patiently
waiting for the time to pass by
so i sit here and write
my thoughts of mind


Robert Araya
Daniel Tyler 10 April 2006

I'm not very hip, being a rather old-fashioned English chap so I find these raps you write, most clever. You must tell me the secrets of 'rap' poetry- as you clearly demonstrate, it can be very powerful.

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Stuart Mason 15 December 2005

I liked the list of simple, happy memories, and the repeated rhymes and the little bit at the end was a nice addition.

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