How Does That Make You Feel? Poem by Michael Fischer

How Does That Make You Feel?

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You pinned me down and beat me senseless
at the time I was defenseless;
How does that make you feel?

You rubbed salt into my wounds
and I surrendered, but you refused to conclude;
How does that make you feel?

But you’re not as intimidating
when your friends aren’t participating;
How does that make you feel?

Come on blackguard, lay it on me;
Let me know what you think of me;
How does that make you feel?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
... Sheila 17 April 2007

Yes, none of those guys alone would have likely had the nerve to do it. I like the structure and message of this poem. Great write.

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Duncan Wyllie 03 April 2007

But you’re not as intimidating when your friends aren’t participating; How does that make you feel? How indeed? This is a very strong piece by you Michael, top marks a ten Love duncan X

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Michael Fischer

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