**********how Long The Dream Can Dance Poem by sarwar chowdhury

**********how Long The Dream Can Dance

Rating: 4.4


Her questiion- 'Anything wrong? ' He didn't answer but in his mind the song- 'I love you' all the day.
Singing or thinking or sinking……
The function- two sort,
Within - soundless, wordless that silence witness.
The other is expression which can't cover all inside 'Ah' and 'Oh',
Wrenching!
The dream dancing!
Things in the offing similar to a tender touch of dearest one who can produce cheers any time any where; or can be matched up to- so long yearning end, a piece of time come out from spacetime to build a castle for rhythmic meeting…..
For long period thirsty get water- staggering union, wave upon wave! Gorgeous!

Charmer he, farmer he, flowers love him at first sight, say- 'hi sweet bell esprit! '. Very easily can talk with green nature where birds tell him love story but he is inept to say her 'I love you'!
She is waiting- he would say- 'I love you my dear! ' or ‘You the one for me for ever.’
They are living within each other though reside away far. How long the dream can dance nobody knows….
Lovers always want- 'Be only mine'. O honest….. shine you shine, your fine! Just do not use for nothing all over love thine.

Is it true always that love breeds love? Why waves are elating for the time being? Ah! Ever if they get into….

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelby L 12 December 2008

Another work of art. Its fantastic, keep up the great work. Looking forward to more of your writings. S.H.

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Linda Winchell 12 December 2008

Not my style of poetry but very beautiful words indeed. More like a letter. Ten, Linda

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Seema Aarella 12 December 2008

wow..a dancing dream it is indeed! The dual nature of a lover's emotions, that thrives to show itself...but still silently yearns inside! A beautiful picture of the lover's internal dilemma......10 from me sarwar!

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Linda Moore 13 December 2008

This is an interesting poem, I like it very much as to How long the Dream can Dance is debatable. Love can last forever but a woman may only wait for a while for you to declare yourself if she wants a family. Men have a much longer window of opportunity to become a parent. Love is always a risk.....10

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Naru Kaede 13 December 2008

This is a great poem! Problem between the man and the woman, Woman it's always need explicitness from man, they always want to be respect, But some man usually can't make it true, sometime they just silence and choose To talk when the perfect time is come, but woman it's always impatient, , , I just can smile when read this, you can truly understand what the problem, Good penned, Regard, Naru Kaede, ,

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 October 2009

‘Is it true always that love breeds love? ’ Multi-polar answer: yes no both or nothing and relative. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to my page and thanks for comment. New post Poetically Noetically

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Seema Gupta 23 September 2009

how true......amezing thoughts ya. regards

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Mubeen Sadhika 16 August 2009

Graceful narration. Repeatedly lingering in mind.

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Is it true always that love breeds love? Why waves are elating for the time being? Ah! Ever if they get into….... love breeds love andhate breeds hate...... beautiful write dear...10 leave mine o, mother and papa do u knwo and papa u too

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Gargi Saha 07 January 2009

WELL WRITTEN. U GET 10++++++++++...........

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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