Sunday, July 30, 2006

How She Must Have Felt? Comments

Rating: 5.0

She grabbed me roughly from my child sleep
And threw me on her back like a sack of mealies
She used to carry from the fields.
Her back was knotted with the hump in her heart


Dee Daffodil 01 August 2006

Mpho (how do you pronounce that by the way?) you write so are truly talented. I love hearing about other cultures, and places far from my home, although this one made me sad for you. I like the fact that you wrote as though you were a baby recalling the episode. Very talented. Hugs, Dee

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You have it, yes, expressed very well. Take a heart, and maybe a little laughs reading my poem The Bowing Millenium Miracle of a wholly perfect African setting

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