Sunday, February 1, 2015

Hurt Comments

Rating: 4.7
Sometimes in life
Sooner or later
We can be sad and bitter
To our surroundings


Rosie Bourget
Aniruddha Pathak 16 February 2020
Feelings of hurt beautifully analysed and depicted in this piece.
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Kesav Easwaran 20 January 2020
Sentiments and attachments. they are the summary of mundane life. Liked the mild sad tone in this well written piece 10+
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Edward Kofi Louis 20 August 2019
Sad and bitter! ! ! ! ! Facing the odds of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Mahtab Bangalee 20 June 2019
hurt the hurt the loving heart they break it make flat o; yet we the love live in light kick the dark................///
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A poignant and heart rending write. The pain is greater when it is caused by our loved ones. But sometimes the pain they caused fuels us to be better, strive harder to have a life of our own, far better than the life they have. Pain will be.healed in God's own time. A wonderful poem that deals with realities of life. Well conveyed write.
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Rosie Bourget 14 March 2019
Family members tend to depend on each other for support, advice, and money, among other things. We also tend to be emotionally invested in one another. When someone you are so committed to says or does something to hurt you, it is perceived as worse than when someone you are less committed to does the same thing. I appreciate you Rose Marie. Thanks a bunch for your comment.
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Britte Ninad 07 June 2018
N-ightmare hugs my brain I-nk of dream kisses my pain G-rasps me fully with the bundle of bone H-urts me amid my sweet dream T-ricks and traps my to walk on showing path M-erely I follow a cheated dreamy birth A-im is destined to beat my sanity R-ightly I find myself in insanity E-rase O dear all my path of tears ACROSTIC!
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Rosie Bourget 14 June 2018
Nicely written acrostic. Thank you so much.
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Khairul Ahsan 26 May 2018
'All they give us is pain That we cannot explain When we try to make it They go around and break it They go all the way To block our way And then here we are sitting in the dark With a broken heart! ' - These are heart rending lines! Despite the despair, the poem is appealing!
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Rosie Bourget 27 May 2018
We poets, when we speak from the heart, we say it just like it is. We don't have the microphone but we have the pen. Thank you Khairul Ahsan.
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Fer Onti 22 April 2018
sadly this poem describes everything that I have been feeling lately
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Rosie Bourget 06 May 2018
Hi Fer, I hope you feel better soon. Think about others when you are feeling down. Talk to people who will lift your spirits.
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Chinedu Dike 01 March 2015
I believe that whatever the situation we face in life, the pains, sorrows, disappointments... we must learn to keep thing in stride. We must propel our spirits to greater altitude, so that we can be able to look down on our tribulations. I like the articulation and penning of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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Rosie Bourget 24 December 2015
Thanks for your input Dike. Merry Christmas to you and your family.
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