I Am Comfortable Poem by lady grace

I Am Comfortable

Rating: 4.6


and when the clouds gather rains

in the vast oceanic sky

when the moon-faded light

resting sleep in sun’s hottest eyes...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramin Chaman 04 October 2009

when the moon-faded light...] A nice line..too. And very peremptory...

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Eyan Desir 04 October 2009

You are comfortable eating food and chatting with friends you forgot to add this to your poem anyway good try 4 nice lines....

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 October 2009

You are so comfortable when the moon fades its light and the sun starts its heat.

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Rafique Farooqi 04 October 2009

Sun and moon are comforting you, ........i love short. poems

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Patti Masterman 04 October 2009

Your poems have a rich and musical vocabulary.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 19 October 2009

a good anology. marks 10 shan

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After the rain we are comfortable with the warmth of the sun. In any pace of life just hang on with HIM. Great write. Thanks! best regards, jdh

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Rafique Farooqi 14 October 2009

It is wonderful GRACE, get relaxed in happy weahers

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Joey Valenzuela 11 October 2009

oh lady grace...you're from phil? ? did you lose someone after peping stroke? ? ?

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Noel Horlanda 11 October 2009

yeah, lots of tears, faded moons, such a sad tale. An honest to goodness poetry.

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