Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 326 Points (20-05-1963 / India)

I Can Look Into Your Heart. - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

I can look into your Heart
And also I can See.
How much love and care
there you kept for me.
I can see
How much you do think
for my health, for my need.
And also I can stare
How much you do share
Your pain, your sufferings
And how much you don't plead!

I can look into your Heart
I can see
The little bit of scorn
kept hidden in care
Like a pinch of salt
in a tasty soup of corn.
the anguish and fire
the dependence and fear
the trust and faith
Which you never spoke to me.
But I can see, I can stare.

I can look into your Heart
Oh my wife, Don't lie
I can stare your heart
I can see your beats.
I can see your soul
Oh my wife, Don't lie
You can't make me a fool.

© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: heart

Comments about I Can Look Into Your Heart. by Palas Kumar Ray

  • (2/23/2009 9:56:00 PM)

    i like this one....very touching... (Report) Reply

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  • Maia Padua (10/26/2008 12:47:00 AM)

    your poem says it all...very nice and inspiring..touching...i salute you for and your poetry....relates the best YOU...humble, responsible and loving....10+ for my good friend. (Report) Reply

  • (10/25/2008 4:19:00 PM)

    aww this peom makes me want to cry! its so emotional! (Report) Reply

  • (10/24/2008 3:36:00 PM)

    Bonded by love and marriage, I think you become one with the person in mind. Able to see things others can not. But love has to be there, with out love, you see nothing but a person, not the soul, .
    I loved this poem very much
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  • (10/19/2008 10:32:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! ... what a nice poem... if she really thinks for you... you can feel that... cann't deny.... :) (Report) Reply

  • (10/15/2008 3:15:00 PM)

    Such vision, so delicately written
    Love duncan X
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  • (10/14/2008 4:41:00 AM)

    Can we really see a person heart
    Old man n woman also did say
    no matter how long we are 2gether with one another
    We don't know all of him/her and what they think
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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/7/2008 8:48:00 AM)

    palas kumar ray
    two hearts spray
    the dust of love
    as green as turf.....
    wife and me
    two a many.
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  • (10/7/2008 3:41:00 AM)

    its a very touching poem. oh, yes, Palas we do feel we know our loved ones like the back of our hand, - love, compassion and presence takes cares of all, being a.
    silent witness also uplifts the bond. full of devotion and sensitivity.10
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  • (10/3/2008 9:11:00 AM)

    It is she loves you & therefore she needs you in many ways. you are true human being who feels for anyone he loves.your feeling always inspires my unsaid phrases to come to light towards my beloved. (Report) Reply

  • (9/29/2008 9:56:00 AM)

    I just loved touching (Report) Reply

  • (9/27/2008 3:37:00 AM)

    when you truly and honestly love someone you can decide how they feel.... just by the looking in their eyes you can see what is going on in their heart....give 10 (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2008 5:12:00 AM)

    A very sensitive and lovely tribute to your wife.I am sure she is keeping your
    poem among her treasures.10 for both of you.

    Warmest regards,

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  • (9/17/2008 11:22:00 PM)

    I envy your wife that you can really see through her heart and know her needs and provide her with your care and love! I wish that the one I love is like you to know how much I love and care for him.I really wish he feels my deep love for him.Anyway I genuinely like this write of yours.It is a great creation! (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/30/2008 8:43:00 AM)

    ....flow of verwes ammmmazing! ......words came out from heart.....fine..........10 (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2008 2:45:00 AM)

    a good poem to read, palas...but all the while don't scare your wife with staring this kind of writes! true sincere enjoyable poem piece...10 (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2008 5:31:00 AM)

    Interesting, perceptive write. It's those closest to us that cannot fool us. Enjoyed this poem. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2008 2:11:00 AM)

    Yes, so intimate is the relationship! (Report) Reply

  • (6/15/2008 11:07:00 AM)

    Very nice & sweet....
    Just Fantastic i wud say... :)
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  • Dipika P (6/15/2008 12:02:00 AM)

    in one word i would say 'superb'...wish u good luck Palas :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 7, 2014

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