Maya Hershey

I Faked ♥ ♥

Would it hurt you deeply if you knew,
that I doubted in every moment I spent with you,
that I faked a smile to make you feel better too,
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  • Harold K SchreibergHarold K Schreiberg (9/12/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    The message is clear at least...
    Nice poem, well written & heartfelt.
    Wouldn't like to be that fellow, though...
    10/10

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  • Mystic Indian (8/17/2009 9:02:00 AM)

    realism and a brutal honesty can never hold words back..and they burst and surge forward in the flow! another 10/10. Kudos!

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  • Afzal Shauq (6/4/2009 11:54:00 PM)

    that you still have passion towards me and belief,
    that everytime I cry.. I feel you grieve,
    that Iam the one who takes away your breeze,
    that you can't stand it when I have to leave,
    that Iam the one who makes your heart beat,
    to know that Iam the one who's gonna make it all tear,
    to know that everytime you smile.... It kills me inside so deep

    so sweet lines with meaningful thought and done in a very sweet way.. hey dear friend, your poetry is necoming more and more rich with the passage of time..good luck for you and hope soon you have your own book of poetry... well done 10++++++++

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