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I Love Butterflies

Rating: 4.0

Among the pings and knocks of cooling metal and the smell of heat I saw you there all shredded silken velvet and pristine color stuck to the grill of my Subaru fluttering still from heat or the breeze surely not nerve endings in your current state of fragmentation When I hit you did you feel pain or simply nothingness or were you suddenly present somewhere else If I could paste you back together with all of this bug shit and goo an organic jigsaw puzzle reanimated you could be my Frankenflutter I love butterflies

Wednesday, May 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For some reason, this poem felt authentic when I didn't include punctuation.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ayman Parray 21 May 2015

Fantastic, distinct and unique style Nancy. Thanks for Sharing

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Allotey Abossey 21 May 2015

I couldn't get the meaning the first time, had to read it again to grab. Greatly unique... Keep it coming... Nancy Butter- worth loves butter- flies.

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Allotey Abossey 21 May 2015

I couldn't get the meaning the first time, had to read it again to grab. Greatly unique... Keep it coming...

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Kelly Kurt 20 May 2015

A distinct style. I found it quite captivating. Looking forward to more from you

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And now I see that cute creature you so love. Nice one.

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