I'M A Free Black Child Poem by Karmy Love

I'M A Free Black Child

Rating: 4.3


I'm A Free Black Child.
I want more in life.
People say,
If you want thing in life you have to work hard.
I'm A Free Black Child.
Who want a high school diploma.
I want to accomplish and achive better things in life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jonas Kildare 06 September 2008

I find GREAT substance in your poem...you have many talents inside. Yes, explore which ones free your soul to express itself. Keep working at it...you will find what God meant you to be. God Bless Karmy..best wishes from Prof. Kildare

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 September 2008

I could not recommend this writing for rreaders because it doesn't have much content. What it does have is fine and would be a good example to anyone who wishes to write. But readers aren't reading poems for writing. They want something of substance and this doesn't have it. GW62

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Rommel Filoteo 06 September 2008

So simple but so strong!

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