Wednesday, August 12, 2009

I Made My Life Comments

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I made my life
this lonely place
a place of black and gray
pulled the blinds on my life

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Doryar Ooh
COMMENTS
Ted M 21 August 2009
Life is an experience, It is the choice we make, but it's never too late to realise the hole we are in, and then take control. The last lines shows your will to change and your faith will show you the way. Nice write.......
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Patrick A. Martin 12 August 2009
'Tis trus we each make our own lives, have our own regrets and our own amends to make but you know that's what makes life the wonderous thing it is. If we all lived careful wellordered lives and we made no mistakes along the way what sort of existance would it be - BLOODY BORING- unlike your poem which is honest and interesting.
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~ Jon London ~ 12 August 2009
Lovely heartfelt lines express your feeling well....the struggle...yet your faith brought you through...showing your true heart of strength....well penned
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