go with the idea of shan...all of his statements are true...your piece is nice..i can relate to this..coz if i cant see my friend online, i felt i am nothing..owww....see 'absence can affect our work..''smileeeeeeeeee
Well, I kinda know this feeling too,
In cyber space you can find great friends that can touch your heart..
If you go around the poemhunter, you can find lots of beautiful people..
Most poets write from heart, and poems do reflect what kinda personality the poet is, this is very good to read..
And your poems reflect a loving father, a husband, a patriot and a good friend..