Wednesday, October 16, 2019

I Need The Sunshine Comments

Rating: 5.0

I need to find the sunshine
I must leave this cold
All it does to my body
Is to make it feel old
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Ray Hansell
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Tulsi Shrestha 16 October 2019

Beautifully crafted creation with a view to reveal relation between sunshine and old aged people.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2019

To get warmness and tender touch you and we all need sunlight. Winter sun has great power to motivate us. This poem carries an excellent imagery of sun. Thank you very much for sharing this...10

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