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Ayni Poet

I Offer You Flowers Of Wisdom

Isolated from the tempestuous sights,
By the fluorescent green still lakes,
A pilgrim bows to mystical Kailash.
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Topic(s) of this poem: buddha, flower, guru, transcendent, wisdom


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  • Erfan K WandoorErfan K Wandoor (5/6/2020 6:16:00 AM)

    Hi.. in your poems ideas and language flow smoothly

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  • Sakalabaktula SairajSakalabaktula Sairaj (11/17/2017 4:08:00 AM)

    it was excellent one

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  • Sakalabaktula SairajSakalabaktula Sairaj (11/17/2017 4:08:00 AM)

    He looks in scary caverns, in every ashram,
    In the wildest otherworldly fields.... i am unable to under this line.. can you explain

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (8/28/2017 12:14:00 PM)

    Beautiful poetry about the devotee that seeks his guru in snow peaked mountains of Kailash. The poem has the spirituality of a seeker.
    He came from far and is unstoppable,
    A rain of ash, a fall of rocks
    Can't lessen his seek for a worthy
    Master in flesh and blood.... is very nice as the search ends with getting of wisdom.10+++

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    Ayni ArtistiqueAyni Artistique(8/28/2017 1:45:00 PM)

    Many thanks for reading! Wisdom is always here, because the Self / Consciousness disperses it with Grace and Love. Namaste!

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  • Bill CantrellBill Cantrell (8/23/2017 8:40:00 AM)

    Good descriptive poetry

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  • Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra (8/23/2017 6:41:00 AM)

    Worn out, one lucky evening he lays down
    And meditates,
    Dissolving irreversibly into the Vacuum,
    The Guru available at any time.

    Now all the Flowers of Wisdom live
    In his pure smile.
    You have well expressed your quest for divine grace and the spiritual thirst within you.
    10 for the poem shared.
    Subhas

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    Ayni ArtistiqueAyni Artistique(8/24/2017 1:29:00 PM)

    Thank you for your kind feedback! Divine Grace pulsates unceasingly through us all but most Beings are busy with the world of forms, unwilling to investigate where do those arise from. Rare are those which know the Immortal Essence. Aum Shanti!

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