Monday, February 24, 2014

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Let us sing joyfully
Spend the day successfully
Think of no remorse
Only prayers without curse

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 February 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

Good job! Stephanie Webster45 minutes ago Really great rhyming and your stanza breaks are really good. Nice writing!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

Church EvolutionOf Kaos45 minutes ago I get the feeling of spirituality Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

amazing Katherine Rod.46 minutes ago great structure, flow, and meaning Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

Let us sing joyfully Spend the day successfully

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