Oh how I love this poem! I think just one of the things that makes it so great is that everybody wants to be remembered and to make a difference while they are here...for however long they are here.
The title makes you want to read it! You could not have picked a better theme or title for your poem and your imagery is Amazing Michael! Such A great well penned piece of art...
4 sure a ten out of 10...and it will be going into my favorite poems list.
Happy writing......have a great day.