Friday, January 3, 2003

I Will Not Let Thee Go Comments

Rating: 3.1

I will not let thee go.
Ends all our month-long love in this?
Can it be summed up so,
Quit in a single kiss?


Robert Seymour Bridges
Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 April 2016

I will not let thee go. Have we chid the changeful moon, Now rising late, and now Because she set too soon, And shall I let thee go? I will not let thee go. Have not the young flowers been content, Plucked ere their buds could blow, To seal our sacrament? I cannot let thee go. Two best stanzas I liked most. Perfect rhyming. Enjoyable.

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2016

Nice n sensual poem......

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Susan Williams 04 February 2016

Hmmm.... a stalker anthem? I understand what this feels like but this feeling cannot be acted on

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Fantastic poem and beautiful rhyming in the end lines

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