Besa Dede

I Will Steal From You... - Poem by Besa Dede

I'll go away one day, you know.
And I want to take as a reminiscence.
A fragment of your kiss on my lips,
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Comments about I Will Steal From You... by Besa Dede

  • (9/10/2015 7:12:00 AM)

    Original beauty so sweet and tender hugs with kisses to remember as the highway of life gives you different paths...lovely to read...regards (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (4/8/2015 12:57:00 AM)

    A well written, clever poem, Besa. Thanks for sharing.
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  • Laiakini Waqanisau (4/2/2014 4:58:00 AM)

    Hi Besa, I really liked this poem. Look forward to reading more poems from your page. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Michelle Claus (3/29/2014 10:42:00 PM)

    Nice sentiment in your poem. Something everyone can relate to. I really admire the title - as soon as I read this title, I Will Steal From You, I had to read the poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (3/29/2014 8:13:00 AM)

    Nice poem! ! ! Congratulations for this being the poem of the day! ! ! You deserve it :) I would love for you to read my poems and comment on them :) (Report) Reply

  • (3/29/2014 7:37:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2013 5:18:00 PM)

    A nice write of a lasting momento of love to endure and keep and carry. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (6/1/2013 7:07:00 AM)

    A lovely poem about stolen love. When we love and then we lost
    we always take a part of that love with us. Then at times we will
    call to mind some of the very special feelings we had for that person.
    Very romantic, felt the words.
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  • (8/15/2012 1:05:00 PM)

    this poem is truely a gem///everything in it is straight from the heart, the passion, the lovers emotion///salute (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2012 2:34:00 AM)

    poets always live future in their day , and never forget a past when aside start to lay (Report) Reply

  • Kali Abyss (4/9/2012 3:54:00 PM)

    Definetly one of my favorites =) well done! (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2012 2:26:00 AM)

    Nice one. I hope you read mine ones too. I hope you like them. (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2012 4:50:00 PM)

    This poem touches my heart as a keepsake of a love so strong that it stands the test of time and beyond... I was deeply moved and inspired. (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2012 8:47:00 AM)

    Enjoyed this poem and others. I didn't know there was a catagory Member Poem of The Day, but got an email saying I'd been chosen for April 12th. That's how I found you. Just finished a book I think you'd enjoy if you haven't read it, Ambition and Survival, Becoming a Poet by Chrisitian Wiman. Have a nice day and keep writing! RL (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2012 3:08:00 AM)

    Fantastic lines. each of us will always keep/A part of one another, as a memoir... These two lines are class.
    beautifully expressed.
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  • (4/1/2012 3:37:00 PM)

    Lingering Effects Of Love Even In Parting...'as a memoir..' its the grand finale...fantastic write tenner ~ niv

    Invite you to comment on '~ Can You Help Me? ~ [22 words poetry]' or any
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  • (4/1/2012 10:17:00 AM)

    aside from any potential message, let us examine the structure of your poem:
    you lack a certain meter but that in an of itself doesn't make a poem bad, what your poem lacks to be great is that certain flow, a composed use of poetic building blocks, in order to compensate for the lack of meter or rhyme. any such alliteration added or less anastrophe used would go a long way in your works
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  • (3/31/2012 9:44:00 AM)

    How wonderfully written, extremely beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (3/30/2012 8:57:00 PM)

    Sweetest ink for today, peaceful piece..i like this art very much..a bit sorrow at the end when bye flying between each other...but the sweet mind by your words bring all soul back to home, home of peace! keep writing! ! the nice hand must Never know how to stop write-Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • (3/30/2012 12:11:00 PM)

    I love this, it's very pretty (Report) Reply

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