If wishes were fishes, we'd all be down the chip shop! sings to this poetic mind.
You gave a very good rendition of a poets torn thoughts here! I particularly liked this verse, however, I would edit out that 'h'.
I wish I can end it
to cease to exhist,
these thoughts penetrate,
they seem to persist.
It rhymes very well
All the best to you
with a smile from
Tai
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If wishes were fishes, we'd all be down the chip shop! sings to this poetic mind. You gave a very good rendition of a poets torn thoughts here! I particularly liked this verse, however, I would edit out that 'h'. I wish I can end it to cease to exhist, these thoughts penetrate, they seem to persist. It rhymes very well All the best to you with a smile from Tai