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I Wish I Were The Tear Falling From Your Eye - Poem by .Pd. is here

I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
Gliding down your cheek
Sensing your skin
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  • Ferdinand Maniraguha (1/4/2016 9:16:00 AM)

    dry of words, you are a great poet (Report)Reply

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  • (7/2/2007 11:30:00 PM)

    Such a tall mountain of comments here, and no wonder; you are so
    good with your words, and so original in your content. Nothing old
    and used up to be found in here. I think this poem says so much;
    it seems almost erotic, in a sweet sort of way, which is also unusual.
    Congratulations again.
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  • (8/31/2006 8:15:00 AM)

    so nice...what a beautiful desire.... to be that to someone... (Report)Reply

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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (8/28/2006 6:34:00 AM)

    How I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
    For at least I would have the company of-
    Your cheek, your skin, your kiss, your chin
    I wish I were the tear falling from your eye
    But even these wishes are dry.

    What is impossible it is found possible thro' your poem.
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  • (8/28/2006 1:21:00 AM)

    hey preeti..
    i liked this 1..
    u too r quite good wid words..
    :)
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  • Brian Dorn (8/16/2006 3:28:00 PM)

    Preeti, this reads like a tear from heaven... great write! !
    Brian
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  • (8/2/2006 1:04:00 PM)

    Absolutely beautiful. Very sad tribute to a great love. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/29/2006 12:46:00 PM)

    this. is. friggin'. AMAZING. a different take on your average sad love poem. i love the image of being the tear on one's cheek. its perfect. i love this poem to death. :) (Report)Reply

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  • (7/27/2006 2:45:00 AM)

    I love this poem doll. I love the title. Its so sensual in a sad way. Beatiful. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/27/2006)

    This is a fine piece of work, a soulful and sorrowful piece of which I can totally relate emotionally. (Report)Reply

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  • Grace Hays (7/24/2006 12:07:00 PM)

    very sweet and sentimental...i love it...keep up the good work (Report)Reply

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  • (7/24/2006 6:39:00 AM)

    I love this drop-down style of yours.... let's call it a ''drop-down style'' of writing poems..... good try and marvelous results.... I pray you have evaporated from the puddle of sorrow... we all wish you would and fly in the clouds.... (Report)Reply

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  • (7/16/2006 4:27:00 AM)

    my my somebody is sad today! ! ! ...new style? ...reads great...sometimes when you dont think of rhyme you get the right mood into the poem...you worked up the mood quite well...a ten for the new style...love...nalini (Report)Reply

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  • (7/16/2006 2:38:00 AM)

    Lovely poem Preeti. You brought out the regret very well!

    Sujata
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  • (7/16/2006 2:33:00 AM)

    Hey Preeti...This is a departure from your usual ones....and a good one: -) (Report)Reply

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