I Wonder.... Poem by luciana isabelle

I Wonder....

Rating: 4.0


Day by day
I watch the same views
The sunrise beautifully
In front of me
Make me feel warmth
Within these extremely
Cold snow
Is this nature?

This morning
I can hear
The bird chirping clearly
Like a whisper through my ears
Bring the beautiful melodies
Within the air
Make me feel calm
Make me feel glad
Make me feel peaceful
Is this nature?

Those rivers
Look like a crystal for me
Cold but still
Make me feel comfortable
Like I’m in the heaven
Continuously
Make me feel happy
Is this nature?

Yeah, it is
No. It was before.
It was indeed calm before

Yeah…
Before
It was destroyed
By our hand, the irresponsible one
Until it became
Like a disaster
Truly a disaster
For the nature,
And for US too…
And again,
Is this nature?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Well, try to make something else...hope you guys like it...
Best regard!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alookh (matin) 16 September 2013

Wow! ! ! a perfect poem....i loved.....and its really true......nature is always generous, but we have always been too greedy to it....unfortunately we are destroying it with our hands....and we forget that it was a gift from God....i did enjoy...................thanx alot! ! ! :)

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 15 August 2013

beautiful words wrap an important message that we must address together and you writted very well thanks for sharing

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Luciana Isabelle 08 July 2013

agreed...i'm looking forward to your poems too

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Khairul Ahsan 07 July 2013

Make me feel calm Make me feel glad Make me feel peaceful Is this nature? Yes, it is. When everything else goes wrong, it's the mother nature who calms, cools and comforts you.

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