v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Gold Star - 38,905 Points (18/06/1974 / chennai)

Icing Without Cake - Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Relationship without integrity
Is like a joshless love
Love without trust
Is like a colorless rainbow
Faith without respect
Is like a captain less ship
Happiness without indulgence
Is like flightless bird
A flower without honey
Is like a flutter less butterfly
A fish without water
Is like a directionless stream
Life without intimacy
Is like an ICING WITHOUT CAKE

Topic(s) of this poem: intimacy

Form: Epistle


Poet's Notes about The Poem

integrity, intimacy twins like love and life

Comments about Icing Without Cake by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/2/2016 9:16:00 AM)

    Great piece of work! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

    V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy(6/2/2016 9:40:00 AM)

    Thanks for the great comment which is the real prize, welcome dear

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  • (4/11/2016 9:05:00 AM)

    Some of the lines, what they seem to say, I agree with.
    The overall effect of this poem is good, and the diction utilized to carry the message is not bad.
    Thanks!
    Luis Estable
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    V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy(4/11/2016 9:47:00 AM)

    Thanks for the comment, vl work still to improvise and fine tune, thanks dear, welcome

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 11, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2016


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