Hasan Ali

Rookie (London, England)

If I Gave You My Heart - Poem by Hasan Ali

If I gave you my heart would you promise
to keep it in a safe place forever
and remember to care for it? , be honest!
Could you promise you'd never ask for it back -
not today, tomorrow, ever?

And if you find you cannot give me this assurance,
could you bestow on me a little kindness
and give me yours as insurance?
You see I've never known for love to be timeless.

For I could never give you my heart complete
and put myself in a position I've been in before
where you'd consider all attraction to have become obsolete
and find your love for me is alive no more.

While I still adore you


Comments about If I Gave You My Heart by Hasan Ali

  • (10/3/2008 6:23:00 PM)


    wow i really enjoyed it....good job
    keep going

    Hataw
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  • (7/27/2008 2:47:00 AM)


    masallah brother, keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • premji premji (5/30/2008 1:37:00 AM)


    If the chosen one is I
    I will lock it inside my soul
    And throw away the keys
    Into the sea with deadly
    sharks move around
    All day....
    Are you contended,
    Prince Hasan Ali?
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 15, 2008


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