Haidee Majola


If It Be So - Poem by Haidee Majola

Now if my blazer is so cheap
on mountain tops why must you scream

As if with crowds to magnify
the truth you twist to falsify

which toxified
you fortify

If it be cheap as you proclaim
It cannot your attire maim

I am the one for it to wear
while you poison the well

And yet you know when something's cute
it stands with spark despite the brute

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Topic(s) of this poem: questions

Form: Couplet


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Bemusement

Comments about If It Be So by Haidee Majola

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/31/2018 1:57:00 PM)


    One for it to wear! !

    Dear in your heart.

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (12/31/2018 2:26:00 AM)


    I am the one for it to wear
    while you poison the well.......scintillating poetic expression my friend! An elegant piece of poetry! My great pleasure reading it time and again!
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    Petals Azureblue (12/31/2018 5:53:00 AM)

    With your revisit you honour my poem.
    I thank you for your support.: -)

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/5/2018 6:03:00 AM)


    A well drafted poem on bemusement.
    Interesting to read.
    Beautiful poem.
    Thanks for sharing.
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    Petals Azureblue (11/5/2018 6:53:00 AM)

    Thank you for these enthusing comments poet Kumarmani. Very much appreciated.

    (11/5/2018 6:22:00 AM)

    Thank you for these enthusing comments poet Kumarmani. Very much appreciated.

  • (11/4/2018 4:35:00 AM)


    I am the one for it to wear! !

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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    (11/5/2018 6:47:00 AM)

    The pleasure is mine Poet Kofi. Your comments are precious... thank you.

  • Mahtab Bangalee (11/1/2018 1:37:00 AM)


    excellent expression on bemusement-

    As if with crowds to magnify
    the truth you twist to falsify

    /// wonderful writings
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    Petals Azureblue (11/1/2018 2:07:00 AM)

    Thank you Mahtab hey. Your lovely comments are received with much joy. Stay blessed.

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (11/1/2018 12:29:00 AM)


    Dear Haidee, such a magnificent poem in couplet style.10+++++++++++ (Report) Reply

    Petals Azureblue (11/1/2018 12:44:00 AM)

    It is a pleasure to receive your sparkling comments Bernard. Thank you so much! ! !

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (11/1/2018 12:06:00 AM)


    And yet you know when something's cute
    it stands with spark despite the brute.....magnificently expressed my friend! An excellent piece of work! Full marks.
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    Petals Azureblue (11/1/2018 12:30:00 AM)

    Thank so much Dillip...most appreciated o poet! ! Stay blessed and prosperous in the Lord.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 31, 2018

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 13, 2018


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