Charles Wiles (Best Love Poems)
Wednesday, September 17, 2008

.....If Love Were Like Water (Best Love Poems) Comments

Rating: 4.5
If love were like water
I'd build you a fountain,
And if love were like stone
I'd bring you a mountain.

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Charles Wiles (Best Love Poems)
COMMENTS
Susan Williams 21 September 2020
oh and I would give it a multitude of tens if one were allowed to- - so since I cannot I will give it a 5 star rating
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Susan Williams 21 September 2020
Sometimes you fall in love with a poem the instant you read it and all you want to do is read it again and again- -well, I have fallen in love with this one and shall sit here and reread it over and over again.
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Chiori Mathew 30 October 2019
That is the real sign of true love not all about materialism everytime nice one Pls comment on my work IGARA CHICKEN
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johnathan overton 02 April 2019
this was a great poem and I like it
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Simon peter 28 February 2019
I wish poems could be more than 5 stanzas
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Chandan Dey 15 September 2018
Yes, love doesn't have any particular shape.It remains in everything in an abstract form and glorify them. Chandan
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Peninnah Ng'ang'a 23 August 2018
And that should be enough!
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Nixon Griffith 21 July 2018
Fantastic, very short sharp and well thought out.
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cycus mango 26 May 2018
it reverberated my heart bravo
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Okafor chinonso 25 April 2018
How I wish I had such tone,,,,,,,charles is a nice talented poet
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Sylvaonyema Uba 17 April 2018
If love where like water I'd build you a fountain. A beautifully expressed poem. Simple and musical. A good use of the Octave device. Sylva Onyema Uba
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Ayoola Olasunkanmy 01 April 2018
Short, But Lifted My Heart Nd Awaked My Soul.
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Thalia ferrell 21 March 2018
I love the poems can`t choose my favorite one I 'll love them all
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Chinedu Dike 18 February 2018
Lofty verse elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions. Beautiful rendition from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Charles and do remain enriched.
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Haoran T 14 February 2018
Short but thought-provoking!Thanks for sharing~
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Aron oddi 14 February 2018
I’ve read this a few times now. And still think it’s beautiful l Thanks Charles
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TAMIA GEOF 26 December 2017
short,retrivative inspirable
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jullianne 09 November 2017
im going to present this in my project
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jullianne 09 November 2017
its short but i love it!
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Jayreeona Collins 23 October 2017
I love this poem I'm going to write my own spin-off version of it.
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