Thursday, September 15, 2016

If We Fail Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where the sea meets the shore and the sand wets the feet
Where rainfall is epic, and has flooded the street
When the wind blows so strongly, it uproots the trees
Nature can bring every day to its' knees

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COMMENTS
Malcolm Two 08 January 2017

Well done. thanks for sharing your poem with us.

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Paul Amrod 08 January 2017

Hi Phil, I have read your witful statements and have truly always giggled inside. Thanks for your terrific humor! ! Paul

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Richard Wlodarski 08 January 2017

Where there is Love and hope No losers All winners

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Rajnish Manga 08 January 2017

Nice portrayal of nature and its vagaries as well as the unfriendly approach of various govt agencies which are otherwise meant to help out people with what they actually deserve. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 07 January 2017

A nice poem. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.

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Bharati Nayak 07 January 2017

Nature is very powerful.When we become too greedy and go on exploiting natural resources, we may have to face nature's fury.Our wellness lies in the preservation of nature..Nicely penned poem, thanks fo sharing.Congratulations for being the Poet of the Day.

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Seamus O Brian 06 January 2017

Compelling contemplation. No, we cannot *fight* nature. We must not see ourselves as antagonists to nature. We must work alongside of nature, moving in the direction and fashion that nature moves. We will never win that fight, otherwise. The final stanza seems to shift to the struggle against man-made institutions, which too can be overwhelming, but at least is feasible when change is necessary. Thank you for this intriguing piece, and congratulations.

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Linet Sabastian 06 January 2017

Creatively written. Congratulations.

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 January 2017

This is how the nature will retaliate if we go on destroying it. If we take care of flora and fauna they will take care of us. Despite our realization of the fact we are not working in that line. Day of doom is not far away. An eye opener. Nice poem. Liked it. Congrats.

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Clarence Prince 06 January 2017

Yes, nature is truly unpredictable. Thanks for sharing, Phil!

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Paul Reed 06 January 2017

The uncertainty of life. Congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day

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Tom Allport 06 January 2017

us against nature? there will only be one winner and it ain't us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 January 2017

Life on earth is truly trial-fraught++++++++++++++++++ Congrats on being selected++++++++++

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Paul Brookes 06 January 2017

Nicely penned and congrats on being poet of the day deserved

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 January 2017

Where rainfall ist epic! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 06 January 2017

Life is full of mysteries. Sometimes very puzzling but we just have to play on in the hands of nature. Nice poem. Sylva-Onyema Uba

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