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Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
Lora Colon
Missouri - United States
Thursday, March 6, 2014

If You Awaken Before Me Comments

Rating: 4.8
If you awaken before me
And I'm crying in my sleep,
Take me in your arms and kiss me,
Give me reason not to weep

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Lora Colon
COMMENTS
Aniruddha Pathak 17 August 2019
The poem flows very well. A wonderful romantic piece, If you wake up before me...
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Jennifer Birchall 05 June 2019
A love we all dream of, a beautiful written poem dear Lora.
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Matthew Holloway 24 March 2019
Another glorious poem you are very talented
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Akhtar Jawad 27 August 2018
Such a beautiful poem, a lovely poetic expression of love in beautiful words.
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Carl Roussell 14 April 2018
A very pretty piece of writing. Thanks for posting.
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Chinedu Dike 12 February 2018
I feel inspired by your style of writing. Your use of language is beautiful. Wonderful creation, lovely and very passionate.
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Bipasha D 25 January 2018
Mesmerizing poetry, loved every bit of it. Warm Regards, Bipasha
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 October 2016
Kiss me gently! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Bursting with beauty and loaded with a love that is refreshing!
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 September 2015
Kiss me gently.... stroke my hair, Give me reason not to weep Make my dreams reality Tell me how much you love me, I love you more than life itself.... i loved these lines in your poem. awakening in love and for your love. is a wonderful feeling. thank you tony
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Dave Lessard 27 August 2015
Great stuff. To awaken to one's love is one of the best treasures in the world.
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Allotey Abossey 24 June 2015
This! Is! Beautiful! A thing of the heart excellent articulation... Pleasant diction... Your poem smells good
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Sally Plumb Plumb 10 June 2015
Lovely poem. I love the line... if you awaken before me...
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Terry Craddock 29 March 2015
Wow absolutely loved this, beautiful, from the tears of the opening stanza 'If you awaken before me And I'm crying in my sleep, ' to the intrigue of If you awaken before me And you need to hear me say: I love you more than life itself.... Awaken me..... you know the way! that resonates 'Awaken me..... you know the way! ' I can get lost in that line :)
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2015
Really very much wonderful poem of the shared. Gently awakening before is really very nice.10.
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Kim Barney 29 March 2015
Tried to leave a comment earlier, but the computer seems to have lost it. This is very well done, Lora, and congratulations on Poem of the Day!
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A very lucid, beautiful poem of warmth and love!
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Brian Stafford 29 March 2015
Very nice poem 10 out of 10! congrats!
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Kassem Oude 29 March 2015
If you awaken before me Circle my neck by hug glee Surround me by warm sea As rose bud by honey bee.
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Rajnish Manga 29 March 2015
Thanks for this lovely poem. Though, it is kind of a monologue of a loving heart, the second part is an obvious one that makes it a romantic dialogue.
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