Dr. Antony Theodore


If You Die Before Me - Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

If you die before me
I would jump down into your grave
and hug you so innocently
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Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about If You Die Before Me by Dr. Antony Theodore

  • Uddhab Naik (10/20/2017 4:19:00 AM)


    Your heart shall beat
    in rhythms unheard...........beautiful lines
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  • Lyn Paul (10/19/2017 7:08:00 AM)


    Simply breath taking write. Truly amazing with lovely photo also.
    Your words are just beautiful.
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  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (10/17/2017 10:31:00 AM)


    Composed melodiously, calm, well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • (10/17/2017 3:00:00 AM)


    it has left me wanting more. (Report) Reply

  • Kishor Kumar Mishra (10/15/2017 9:08:00 PM)


    f the dark souls lead you to Hades
    I will dance and dance with you
    even in the nether world. A narration of true love. The lover ready to accompany with the lady love to the Hades.

    A very very beautiful poem.10++++
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  • (10/13/2017 10:56:00 AM)


    this is great! Every piece you write just keeps on swinging for the fences. I really need to know how your brain works-it's crazy good.. Very well penned.. Doc (Report) Reply

  • (10/13/2017 7:38:00 AM)


    Your heart shall beat (Report) Reply

  • (10/12/2017 7:41:00 AM)


    vary good poem lots of feeling within this one (Report) Reply

  • (10/11/2017 1:44:00 PM)


    Just imagine
    his wife eighty seven dies
    her husband, eighty nine
    jumps into her grave
    and cries, not only she's dead
    his hips broke

    (no orthopedic surgeon is there
    at the funeral)

    the mourners try to pull him out
    he resists
    and gives kisses to her lips
    so passionately that her breath

    dead wife's breath! ?

    becomes his own
    the embalmer's lipstick
    becomes his own
    and his soul
    becomes her own

    the grave digger standing by says
    what a pain in the butt

    - inspired by If You Die Before Me by Dr. Antony Theodore
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    Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (10/13/2017 8:08:00 AM)

    correction: i wanted to tell u this as answer: death is not death when you really love. May be u may count love as a mystical experience. That was my intention in writing this poem. Thank u dear poet. God bless you. tony

    Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (10/13/2017 8:05:00 AM)

    dear poet, thank u for ur interesting thoughts and comments. i liked and smiled all the way as i read your comment. i wanted to tll u this as answer: death is not death when you reall love. may be u may count love as a mystical experience. that was my intention in writing this poem. thank u dear poet. God bless you. tony

    Ravi Kopra (10/11/2017 1:49:00 PM)

    posted here: https: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-take-on-dr-antony-theodore-s-poem-if-you-die-before-me/

  • Chukwuma Ndububa (10/6/2017 1:30:00 PM)


    You just know how to melt my heart with these touching thoughts and wide imaginations. It's a mere poem but my heart feels eggy to bear the poignancy. God bless your craft, good Sir. I also love your regard for God's supremacy in your works. Bless your soul. (Report) Reply

  • Suratha Kumar Rout (10/2/2017 11:53:00 PM)


    I shall kiss you.
    So intimately shall I kiss you
    that your breath becomes mine.
    In one breath of love shall
    we merge into hugs of true joy.
    Wow! this poem is really very nice.
    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
    10+++++
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  • (9/26/2017 7:51:00 AM)


    It shows love and affection. Well writen Dr. Antony! (Report) Reply

  • Sasmita Rani Nayak (9/26/2017 1:32:00 AM)


    I shall kiss you.
    So intimately shall I kiss you
    that your breath becomes mine.
    In one breath of love shall
    we merge into hugs of true joy.


    A great poem dear poet.
    Thanks for it.
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  • Ravi Sathasivam (9/10/2017 6:36:00 AM)


    A heartfelt and touching write. Well penned too. Thanks for sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • Ankit Raj Goyal (9/7/2017 5:37:00 AM)


    It's so touching and beautiful. Straight from a tender heart. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Astha Tiwari (9/7/2017 3:56:00 AM)


    So deeply written it shows the real love. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Sahoo (9/4/2017 11:51:00 PM)


    If you die before me
    I would jump down into your grave
    and hug you so innocently
    Beautiful poem..Great poem sir.
    Thanks.
    10+++++
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  • Tabasom Azadee (9/2/2017 9:46:00 AM)


    hello
    the beautiful and deep poem that needs a lot of fantasy
    I enjoyed
    thank you
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  • Pratik Rajani (8/31/2017 11:12:00 AM)


    nice one check out my poem sun and planet. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/30/2017 12:41:00 PM)


    It is a beautiful poem on love having thrilling expression. The beginning is fantastic. Each and every line is interesting to read. I appreciate this poem dear Dr. Antoni, you have got full vote. (Report) Reply



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