i love this one. so much pain.. i cant read your words when all i can see is your emotions flowing out out of your heart. thats when you know you have something special when you forget you are reading and just feel. very cooo. keep writing
Very emotional. However, if I may, I suggest not capatlizing every word and Instead capitilize words that mean a lot to you.
For example:
The bird was Death.
And it flew on Angelic wings.
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