swetha vankayalapati

In Bruises

Promises made in haste
slow to take an offence;
Thoughts slur through flowing tears,
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  • Heather WilkinsHeather Wilkins (10/7/2013 7:25:00 PM)

    a powerful poem. Love is never saying your sorry. a bruise is difficult to heal.

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  • Rigzin NamgyalRigzin Namgyal (9/26/2012 11:14:00 AM)

    ..powerful writing Swetha..it left me in bruises..

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  • Oludipe Oyin SamuelOludipe Oyin Samuel (7/13/2012 9:22:00 AM)

    powerful, mind-reflecting piece. A 10+

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  • Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo) (6/23/2012 1:15:00 AM)

    The thoughts and memory of what has happen, lie upon the days in which look back, of the pain, of the tears, and of what should have been done but was not done, the central tendency of emotions also takes part of the bruise, and then makes sounds of all the thorn and feared moments, Great Reflection as always

    The_African_Son
    T_A_S
    (Th³_ªfR¹cª¬_šºN)

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  • Spiritual Seeker (6/22/2012 10:25:00 AM)

    Absolutely beautiful...the play of words and meanings. excellent read! A great 10.

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  • Pheko Motaung (6/20/2012 11:44:00 AM)

    All my life I am pursued by my own self inflicted bruises! And your poem is great and powerful! Yuh's the cute poet of our times

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  • Ekaterina M. PolischukEkaterina M. Polischuk (6/17/2012 4:37:00 AM)

    wonderful poem.... it`s full of feelings, emotions and hart reality. it sounds... i like it

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  • Sharad JunejaSharad Juneja (6/17/2012 4:21:00 AM)

    Sorry........ Sorry.....Sorry.......................I would have felt for me if I would have missed this beautiful work of urs.............

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  • Vipins PuthooranVipins Puthooran (6/14/2012 4:31:00 PM)

    'Tis an excellent poem! ! ! !
    Keep up the good work! ! !
    I live in Bruises though//
    Top marks! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Indira Babbellapati (6/14/2012 6:57:00 AM)

    u hv versified an intangible emotion in an excellent manner... i can literally touch the bruises!

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  • Elena SanduElena Sandu (6/14/2012 12:55:00 AM)

    Misterious air sneaks into my breathe...whoever done any wrong to me forgiven may be. Your poem filled my whole being...feel no more pain. Thank you!

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  • Darkangel FlyfreeDarkangel Flyfree (6/13/2012 3:04:00 PM)

    A very good poem indeed. I like the flow of this one.

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  • Shashank Dwivedi (6/13/2012 2:07:00 PM)

    nyc poetry by a nyc poet

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  • Kasia FedykKasia Fedyk (6/13/2012 12:01:00 PM)

    Swetha, this poem is very deep I can feel your poem to the core and the message it brings forth. You are an incredible writer, I so enjoy reading your masterpieces. Thank you! Kasia

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  • Joub KahuriaJoub Kahuria (6/13/2012 11:16:00 AM)

    sorry if i knew i would hurt you or get hurt i would have warned you first. great piece of art well crafted.

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (6/13/2012 10:57:00 AM)

    Hey Swetha, i like this poem...it really original..it's your way in writing..i always notice this style in your poem...and it's good..i like the message as well the flow u bring it here., keep writing_Unwritten Soul

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