katie blake


In Hiding - Poem by katie blake

Clear and blue
The sky above me

Luscious green
Elm trees surround me

Still and silent
The lake below me

A sight
Rarely seen

But under all that beauty
There lay a deadly trap

The shy holds
The envy
Of the angels

The trees have
A horrible secret

And the lake
Is a graveyard
For empty souls


Comments about In Hiding by katie blake

  • (5/13/2010 4:47:00 AM)


    I liked the lines that the lake is a graveyard (Report) Reply

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  • (12/17/2009 1:11:00 AM)


    after the fifth couplet/stanza....seems like a warning.
    a pleasant piece of work..
    ill stay far from this lake of ures.
    lol.
    nice write.
    -killy =)
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  • C. P. Sharma (12/17/2009 1:09:00 AM)


    Everywhere is His home
    And He resides in beauty.
    CP
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 16, 2009



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