john tiong chunghoo

In Pscyhe With Divinity

i like the silence at the lake
as little insects dance
plunging their little legs
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  • Shelley B. Keats (10/25/2005 9:51:00 AM)

    beautifully written!

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  • Raynette Eitel (10/25/2005 9:36:00 AM)

    Very nice, John. Check the use of the word 'little.' Perhaps you could find some other words so you don't use too many in one poem. Just a thought.

    Raynette

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  • Marcy Jarvis (10/25/2005 9:20:00 AM)

    another gem, John. I love this...

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  • Uriah Hamilton (10/25/2005 8:40:00 AM)

    Once again, you share your spiritual self, thanks.

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  • Mary Nagy (10/25/2005 7:27:00 AM)

    I really enjoyed the image here John. Beautiful. Sincerely, Mary

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