Sunlight through the slanted shutters
Lay stripes across her breasts,
Bars across the sheets,
Precise angular lines of shadow
This is so very passionate indeed.. lovely to read.. very visual..you painted the scene well.. this is sweet and lovely, I am kinda lost for words after reading this one....
with lots of lovesss
This awesome arrangement of carefully selected words conjures and almost photographic image before the reader's eyes - a beautiful and sensual image. And then there's those two closing lines, which somehow manage to touch the heart with a message deeper than the visual experience. I love it! S :)
...lovely..lovely..lovely...such a convincing gentle depiction.. :)
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