Seema Chowdhury

In The Park Of My Life - Poem by Seema Chowdhury

Its a very tough period of my life
Where I feel lost
And disheartened by life's load
Where tender emotions are lost
And my eyes see
A tale of thousand agonies....

Where I see no point of return
And I am forced by my soul
To acknowledge the pain
In the darkest hour
Of the uncertain world.....

I wish I could
Walk on the freshly fallen soft snow
In the park of my life
And dive into the world of wonders
And release all moments and memories
To shape and focus on a new vision
And positive aspects of life
And take the next powerful step
In my life's journey............

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about In The Park Of My Life by Seema Chowdhury

  • (5/22/2010 9:10:00 AM)

    This is the line that means the most to me.

    And dive into the world of wonders

    Sometimes we simply have to take the leap into the unknown.
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (5/16/2010 11:00:00 AM)

    'I wish I could
    Walk on the freshly fallen soft snow'

    nice lines! though I never saw a real snow before me because here in the Philippines there is no snow, i can imagine your figurative while thinking of a Christmas movie... nice one! quite imaginative... good figurative!
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  • Ravi Sathasivam (5/14/2010 11:44:00 PM)

    Very touching poem.
    As usual, written with lovely words.
    Enjoyed reading it
    Thanks for sharing with me
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  • (5/12/2010 10:39:00 AM)

    And sure hoping against hope is Life and will enliven you…nice poem of inner struggle...
    Voted 10
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • (5/11/2010 5:16:00 AM)

    Words have a dimension to them (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (5/10/2010 7:22:00 PM)

    The park of life is always there, but in the midst of pain one does not see it. (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (5/10/2010 6:43:00 PM)

    Oh dear! Be strong! The wish is there, you are half way up!
    Your poems, as always, touched my heart, thank you!
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 10, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 27, 2014

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