Linda Ori

Rookie - 192 Points (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

! In Your World - Poem by Linda Ori

You say you need me in your life
You pledge undying love -
But there are places in your world
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Comments about ! In Your World by Linda Ori

  • (3/30/2008 2:23:00 AM)

    Your facility with traditional form is awesome - it is obviously the perfect springboard for your creative spirit to fly. And the content of your verse is so honestly penned - like a soliloquy in a Shakespeare play, you weigh the two sides of your contemplation and shape the whole with great finesse. I guess all I can say is you can't change them, no matter how hard you try. They are as they are. Such a tenderhearted poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report)Reply

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  • (3/21/2008 4:08:00 PM)

    You boil complexity down to clarity and so make reading your work a real pleasure... but in so doing you make its message more transparent, more immediate, and more heartbreaking... it's a writing strength that I just cannot master! I bow to your skill Linda. I was in this yes/no place once for a long time... and when you decide to finally quit they want you to stay... until they feel secure again... and so it goes.. This one will resonate with many I think... Elegant, fluent, and right to the point as always... sterling work Linda Ori... xxx jim (Report)Reply

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  • john tiong chunghoo (3/20/2008 11:25:00 PM)

    wow real sob story. i feel like sobbing. linda it flows like a song. keep the good work up. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/18/2008 8:10:00 AM)

    L, you could have written this just for me. It has brought more than a tear to my eye. Some men (in particular) were just meant to live their lives alone, I think. And as Frank says it is indeed flawless, and any 'imperfections' (from another perspective) simply serve to grab more of the reader's attention. t x (Report)Reply

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  • (3/18/2008 3:21:00 AM)

    This is just beautiful Linda..I love it (Report)Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/18/2008 2:11:00 AM)

    Midnight...There is always a ray of light to be found...sometimes we're just looking for it in the wrong direction....This is a brilliant piece of work....virtuallly flawless in metre & fluxion.....Arguably, one of your best, i'd say, based on pure literary principle.And, HAPPY(2 hours/your time) after ST. PATRICK'S DAY!

    ~Fj R ~
    ..2008..
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  • (3/18/2008 1:02:00 AM)

    Unfortunate but........................! (Report)Reply

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